Visual Communication Assignment 3

Our task was to improve a font.
First i worked on "Informal Roman". In terms of readability I removed the serif.

After discussing all the assignment work of the course I decided to deal with one moee font.
My first work might have improved the font but the changes were to drastic.

For my second try I choose the font "Adobe Caslon Pro Bold". Now I tried to spot all the inconsistencys that annoyed me. This is the result.

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